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Thanks for the comment. I am really just considering cutting the entire first part out. I think it would be better off without it, and still be story enough.
The second part was actually going to be the first part originally, with a whole different second part. that's the reason for the introduction of the Dew Knight like it is.
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People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.
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