You Stole My Dew!

**DewKnight** · November 4th, 2007, 2:27 AM

I just finished the 4th version of the final cut of the You Stole My Dew Movie.

This is a movie project for editing class. The first part is kind of meh, but I am proud of the second part. Please watch! Let me know what you think! I know there are problems, but this was a project to make mistakes and learn from them.

This version is pretty much complete from what we would like to have.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=kOKQQ2XLCBo

H · November 4th, 2007, 2:56 AM

I have to say, it wasn't bad. First part was kind of blah, but second part had some good humour and action.

**DewKnight** · November 4th, 2007, 3:07 AM

Thanks for the comment. I am really just considering cutting the entire first part out. I think it would be better off without it, and still be story enough.

The second part was actually going to be the first part originally, with a whole different second part. that's the reason for the introduction of the Dew Knight like it is.

**ceo** · November 4th, 2007, 3:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by H

I have to say, it wasn't bad. First part was kind of blah, but second part had some good humour and action.

My thoughts pretty much precisely!

Weren't you going to sleep, Dew? You Twitterlied!

**DewKnight** · November 4th, 2007, 3:49 AM

I can never get to sleep. I thought I was asleep twice, but here I am. I'm considering popping some of my leftover codeine, it always knocks me out.

**ceo** · November 4th, 2007, 4:25 AM

Codeine has a tendency to do that. Yes.

I'm kind of tired but I can't sleep.

**Kayla** · November 4th, 2007, 11:08 PM

Ok... that was awesome. Love the way you filmed it. You guys are geniuses.

Agree on cutting the entire first part out...

**DewKnight** · November 4th, 2007, 11:58 PM

I've got about 10 seconds or less that I am going to leave in of the first scene to establish the stolen Dew. Otherwise it would just be the Dew Knight and ninjas fighting, which they do quite a bit, but then I would need a new title for the movie.

Thanks everyone for the comments!

**DewKnight** · November 7th, 2007, 2:45 AM

Thanks for watching it and for the comments all!

I finished the final version (cut out most of the first part), and have uploaded it.

We're putting on a film festival and this will be shown, along with my next video: Cooking with Ninjas.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DS-3BgSpqXA

November 4th, 2007, 2:27 AM	#1 (permalink)
DewKnight Skittles Super #1 Joined in Aug 2004 Lives in a space ship Hosted on dedi 6,724 posts Gave thanks: 98 Thanked 190 times	You Stole My Dew! I just finished the 4th version of the final cut of the You Stole My Dew Movie. This is a movie project for editing class. The first part is kind of meh, but I am proud of the second part. Please watch! Let me know what you think! I know there are problems, but this was a project to make mistakes and learn from them. This version is pretty much complete from what we would like to have. http://youtube.com/watch?v=kOKQQ2XLCBo __________________ Mountain Dew Knight People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.

November 4th, 2007, 3:07 AM	#3 (permalink)
DewKnight Skittles Super #1 Joined in Aug 2004 Lives in a space ship Hosted on dedi 6,724 posts Gave thanks: 98 Thanked 190 times	Thanks for the comment. I am really just considering cutting the entire first part out. I think it would be better off without it, and still be story enough. The second part was actually going to be the first part originally, with a whole different second part. that's the reason for the introduction of the Dew Knight like it is. __________________ Mountain Dew Knight People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.

November 4th, 2007, 3:49 AM	#5 (permalink)
DewKnight Skittles Super #1 Joined in Aug 2004 Lives in a space ship Hosted on dedi 6,724 posts Gave thanks: 98 Thanked 190 times	I can never get to sleep. I thought I was asleep twice, but here I am. I'm considering popping some of my leftover codeine, it always knocks me out. __________________ Mountain Dew Knight People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.

November 4th, 2007, 11:08 PM	#7 (permalink)
Kayla Searcher Surpass Staff Joined in May 2003 Lives in Orlando 24,699 posts Gave thanks: 943 Thanked 806 times	Ok... that was awesome. Love the way you filmed it. You guys are geniuses. Agree on cutting the entire first part out... __________________ Follow Surpass on Twitter and Facebook Check out interesting finds on the Surpass Blog .... it's coming.

November 4th, 2007, 11:58 PM	#8 (permalink)
DewKnight Skittles Super #1 Joined in Aug 2004 Lives in a space ship Hosted on dedi 6,724 posts Gave thanks: 98 Thanked 190 times	I've got about 10 seconds or less that I am going to leave in of the first scene to establish the stolen Dew. Otherwise it would just be the Dew Knight and ninjas fighting, which they do quite a bit, but then I would need a new title for the movie. Thanks everyone for the comments! __________________ Mountain Dew Knight People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.

November 4th, 2007, 2:56 AM	#2 (permalink)
H after g, before i Resident. Joined in Jul 2004 Lives in N,BC,CA 8,058 posts Gave thanks: 48 Thanked 129 times	I have to say, it wasn't bad. First part was kind of blah, but second part had some good humour and action.

November 4th, 2007, 4:25 AM	#6 (permalink)
ceo Senior Member Super #1 Joined in Jan 2005 1,540 posts Gave thanks: 69 Thanked 33 times	Codeine has a tendency to do that. Yes. I'm kind of tired but I can't sleep.

November 7th, 2007, 2:45 AM	#9 (permalink)
DewKnight Skittles Super #1 Joined in Aug 2004 Lives in a space ship Hosted on dedi 6,724 posts Gave thanks: 98 Thanked 190 times	Thanks for watching it and for the comments all! I finished the final version (cut out most of the first part), and have uploaded it. We're putting on a film festival and this will be shown, along with my next video: Cooking with Ninjas. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DS-3BgSpqXA __________________ Mountain Dew Knight People should not be afraid of their governments. Governments should be afraid of their people.

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